haikuRefuse. (haiku) burnt leaves and plasticswallowed by eddies and waves—our marriage, undone © Nancy Botta, 2020 Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading... Related Standard
Your work always seems to touch me Nancy. The image really conveys the emotion. LikeLiked by 2 people December 23, 2020 at 12:14 pm Reply
Like a nail driven through the veneer buried deep Life’s pains never cease This is a sad and painful poem but marvelous in its construction. LikeLiked by 3 people December 24, 2020 at 7:45 pm Reply
Beautiful metaphor for the struggle of the green ideology. LikeLiked by 2 people December 25, 2020 at 12:14 am Reply
Searingly honest, a whirlpool in three lines. LikeLiked by 3 people December 28, 2020 at 6:42 am Reply
Haha, only you could make sad, sound so beautiful. Marvelous. It haunts me. The words are so errie, and echo inside me, like a shout or call inside a long dark tunnel. It just draws me deeper. LikeLike March 11, 2021 at 1:56 pm Reply
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Your work always seems to touch me Nancy. The image really conveys the emotion.
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Nicely done. A true haiku.
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Beautiful and crushing…
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Sad indeed. I hope brighter days follow.
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Like a nail driven
through the veneer buried deep
Life’s pains never cease
This is a sad and painful poem but marvelous in its construction.
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Beautiful metaphor for the struggle of the green ideology.
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Wow. I’m blown away.
– TishGirl❤️
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Searingly honest, a whirlpool in three lines.
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I’m so sorry.
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Wonderful lines
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Haha, only you could make sad, sound so beautiful. Marvelous. It haunts me. The words are so errie, and echo inside me, like a shout or call inside a long dark tunnel. It just draws me deeper.
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