haikuwhen we leave. (haiku) Thousands of camerasobserve an empty city;deer gaze at streetlights.© Nancy Botta, 2020 Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading... Related Standard
So lonely a feel to this one… Deer in the lights made me smile anyway. LikeLiked by 1 person August 23, 2020 at 10:08 pm Reply
Feels like zombies. Empty from inside and out. LikeLiked by 1 person August 24, 2020 at 2:44 pm Reply
Great post. I like that it gives the reader an eerie feeling. LikeLiked by 1 person September 21, 2020 at 10:54 am Reply
you are better than me because i am not good when i try to write haiku LikeLiked by 1 person November 20, 2020 at 9:19 pm Reply
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So lonely a feel to this one… Deer in the lights made me smile anyway.
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Excellently evoked
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Feels like zombies. Empty from inside and out.
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Glad you are back
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Great post. I like that it gives the reader an eerie feeling.
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you are better than me because i am not good when i try to write haiku
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