haikuVernal. (haiku) Gilding a goldfinch perched within a budding tree— he unties her scarf. © Nancy Botta, 2019 Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading... Related Standard
leans towards the classical notion of Haiku. I like it LikeLiked by 1 person April 9, 2019 at 6:07 pm Reply
Wonderful Haiku. I like the way that you build a pause after the second line. It adds a bit of anticipation to the final line. LikeLiked by 1 person April 9, 2019 at 10:35 pm Reply
Goldfinch are beautiful aren’t they. Here’s one of my own … goldfinch sing harmonic colours of aural alchemy LikeLiked by 1 person April 13, 2019 at 3:42 pm Reply
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I really like your work.
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thank you!
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leans towards the classical notion of Haiku. I like it
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Wonderful Haiku. I like the way that you build a pause after the second line. It adds a bit of anticipation to the final line.
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Goldfinch are beautiful aren’t they. Here’s one of my own …
goldfinch sing
harmonic colours
of aural alchemy
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Stunning haiku!
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