13 thoughts on “Dandelion. (haiku)”

1. Very nice!

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   March 29, 2019 at 4:34 pm Reply

2. Thank you for following. I love this haiku about Dandelions. Here’s one of my own to share …

   Lazy summer days
   Dandelion clocks tell time
   Looking for lost dreams

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   March 29, 2019 at 7:05 pm Reply

3. Beautiful one! 🌸

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   March 29, 2019 at 10:20 pm Reply

4. Lovely how the three layers of lines weave the possibilities! 🙂

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   March 29, 2019 at 10:35 pm Reply

5. So beautiful! Reminds me of the innocence of childhood! Thank you. 🙂

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   March 30, 2019 at 11:20 am Reply

6. I’m fairly new to this form of poetry but I believe I could respond to your haiku with two related lines of seven syllables …

   dandelion clocks tell time
   one o’clock two o’clock three

   does this work … as a renga!

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   March 31, 2019 at 5:36 pm Reply

   • I like it!

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     April 1, 2019 at 8:51 am Reply

     • Thank you!

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       April 1, 2019 at 10:22 am

   • Sorry! I should have said a ‘tan renga’.

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     April 2, 2019 at 5:50 pm Reply

7. Stunning

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   April 2, 2019 at 10:13 am Reply

8. We’ve all made them young and old, something passed down from generation to generation.

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   April 26, 2019 at 5:24 pm Reply

9. Love the imagery.

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   May 5, 2019 at 7:39 pm Reply

10. Makes me feel like a little girl.

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    August 28, 2019 at 3:42 pm Reply