13 thoughts on “Downpour. (haiku)”

1. Cit. “Black umbrellas bloom”…Great!
   Beware of salty squalls that might pick them.

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   February 26, 2019 at 3:02 pm Reply

2. perfect

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   February 26, 2019 at 3:22 pm Reply

3. Reblogged this on K Morris – Poet.

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   February 26, 2019 at 3:28 pm Reply

4. I agree, awesome last line

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   February 26, 2019 at 3:36 pm Reply

5. Lovely!

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   February 26, 2019 at 5:26 pm Reply

6. You are so right Nancy. An umbrella is standard equipment during the wet season.

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   February 26, 2019 at 5:42 pm Reply

7. Beautiful image captured through the haiku. I loved it😊

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   February 26, 2019 at 6:25 pm Reply

8. Ace.

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   February 26, 2019 at 6:29 pm Reply

9. I was knocked back a step with the last line – it is unexpected and pure perfection – WOW!

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   February 26, 2019 at 9:41 pm Reply

   • Thanks!!

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     February 27, 2019 at 6:58 am Reply

10. Your lines never cease to impress. wow

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    February 27, 2019 at 8:31 am Reply

11. Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.

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    March 15, 2019 at 7:17 pm Reply

12. This is wonderful. Love your poems. This is how haiku should be done.

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    May 10, 2019 at 4:08 pm Reply