4 thoughts on “Under the weather. (haiku)

  1. hawkelsonrainier says:

    I see two distinct images: A bleak winter’s day and somebody contending with an illness. And though the images are apparently distinct, a closer look reveals they share a common thread. A clammy fever and the damp cold of winter combine to form a subtle, but powerful mood that permeates the entire haiku. This really struck me as exceptional writing. Thank you for sharing.

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