7 thoughts on “The last swim. (haiku)

  1. I like haikus that convey snapshots, vivid (even though mine always tends to be abstract for some reason) because with one single snapshot, you get an entire world. It conveys mood that accompanies that snapshot, so visual cues squeezed in are also great. That’s why I loved this – thanks so much for sharing.

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