I like haikus that convey snapshots, vivid (even though mine always tends to be abstract for some reason) because with one single snapshot, you get an entire world. It conveys mood that accompanies that snapshot, so visual cues squeezed in are also great. That’s why I loved this – thanks so much for sharing.
Rusted Honey 
nice relaxing image.
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Lovely!
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I like haikus that convey snapshots, vivid (even though mine always tends to be abstract for some reason) because with one single snapshot, you get an entire world. It conveys mood that accompanies that snapshot, so visual cues squeezed in are also great. That’s why I loved this – thanks so much for sharing.
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Glancing golden glow
Sunbeam bounce on summer sea
Breathe in fading light
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You have an ability to conjure interesting imagery. All strength to you as a writer
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You’ve made me feel warm! Lovely.
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