Hands press down
flapping like a silly bird,
I can’t stop paddling-
dumb mouth open,
red eyes gawking at the sun.
Panic burns my thighs
but I wonder,
how is hope so heavy
when my lungs are full of foam.
It’s so quiet here,
just a small ripple
in a vast and indifferent undertow.
No one notices
help-
no one sees
please-
no one hears
SOMEONE-
I don’t think
I can save myself.
© Nancy Botta, 2018
Powerful imagery. ❤
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Yes, I thought the same thing. I could feel myself drowning. Did a lovely job.
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Such helplessness…
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Powerful!
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Good poem. Much bigger and fuller than the bubble.
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Touching…
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