haikuThursday 7:58 A.M. (haiku) Blanched, pregnant sky delivers morning thunder; gutters swell with leaves. © Nancy Botta, 2018 Share this:Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading... Related Standard
Love the last line especially. Did you take the photo yourself. I love it. LikeLiked by 1 person September 8, 2018 at 2:12 am Reply
Love the style and imagery of “pregnant sky”. Lovely piece of poetry! – Brian LikeLiked by 1 person September 9, 2018 at 4:26 am Reply
This is brilliant, and follows metaphor to the end. LikeLiked by 1 person September 11, 2018 at 1:31 am Reply
A stroke of genius, nicely said.
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What a great sprinkling of poetry.
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Love the last line especially.
Did you take the photo yourself. I love it.
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Love the style and imagery of “pregnant sky”. Lovely piece of poetry! – Brian
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I like this one greatly!
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I really loved how you’ve used kireji!
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This is brilliant, and follows metaphor to the end.
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